Published by: Simon Pulse
Fury by Elizabeth Miles
Sometimes sorry isn't enough....
It’s winter break in Ascension, Maine. The snow is falling and everything looks pristine and peaceful. But not all is as it seems...
Between cozy traditions and parties with her friends, Emily loves the holidays. And this year’s even better--the guy she’s been into for months is finally noticing her. But Em knows if she starts things with him, there’s no turning back. Because his girlfriend is Em’s best friend.
On the other side of town, Chase is having problems of his own. The stress of his home life is starting to take its toll, and his social life is unraveling. But that’s nothing compared to what’s really haunting him. Chase has done something cruel...something the perfect guy he pretends to be would never do. And it’s only a matter of time before he’s exposed.
In Ascension, mistakes can be deadly. And three girls—three beautiful, mysterious girls—are here to choose who will pay.
Em and Chase have been chosen.
1. (--) Em, the protagonist - Oh, man I disliked her. I was tempted to stop reading because of her. She was selfish and made such stupid choices. And honestly? I can't even say much about her personality because I couldn't really find a reason to like her. At first she's annoyed with her best friend--though there's very little reason, from what I could tell; yeah, Gabby stopped paying as much attention as before, but then at the end of their phone conversation (at the beginning of the book), she says she wants to sleep over at Em's... which makes Em's annoyance trivial in my opinion. And if Em goes on and on about how many things she and Gabby have done together and how they're such great best friends, why on earth is Em so unbelievably disloyal?! Besides all that, Em is also not assertive and bemoans her situation way too much for my liking.
2. (+) Side Characters - The side characters are not that well developed per say, but they get the job done. It felt like high school on repeat. I wasn't particularly attached to any of them either, but again, I thought that they, in combination with the descriptions of Ascension, really set the scene. Chase is somewhere between protagonist and side character, but I almost wish that he were the protagonist rather than Em. Even though he too does stupid stuff and I didn't quite like his character, I liked him more than Em.
3. (+/-) The Idea - Okay, the idea is kind of cool with karma and the Furies... but it went too far / was hard to believe. Yeah, all the kids did something stupid, but haven't we all done something we regret? And have we all paid such drastic prices for them? This scenario offers no chance for maturation and character growth and realization.
4. (+) Unexpected Ending - I was angry for a bit regarding who the punishments were doled out to, but then the ending came along, and I was happy again. And besides that little occurrence, I didn't know what to expect as to what would happen to Em... and what did happen shocked me but still fit in with the rest of story. I thought it was pretty appropriate. If the story had been a little longer, Em might have grown on me more. (She does get better later on in the story. Maybe after 200 pages.)
5. (+) The Writing - The writing was really fluid. It was a good balance of character thought/perspective and action, and it was easy to slip into what was happening to Em and Chase. Funny that Lauren Kate is an author who blurbed the book, because I'd actually say their third person perspective writing is pretty similar.
6. (+) Pacing - The best part of the story in my opinion. YA is filled with hits and misses in regards to pacing, but this one worked for me. I didn't put the book down because it flowed pretty well and the tension kept increasing. My only complaint would be the first two chapters--they were clogged down with backstory and had very little happen (both characters are getting ready for a party).
7. (+/-) The Villains - So you know who the villains are... and you have an inkling for what they could do based off the prologue... so you do feel they're dangerous... and yet I didn't feel as threatened by them as I thought I would. The explanation for why they do what they do was completely unsatisfying for me. And their names and appearances? Okay, maybe it was supposed to be one of those situations where you don't expect such cruelty from delicate? things, but when I read about the Furies, I already feel like something bad will happen so I don't need that whole "things are not what they seem" type. I want to know why. I want to really feel their power. And in both cases, the book was lackluster.
8. (--) The Action - There's plenty of action when the story gets going... but the things that actually happen seem so trivial! This is my complaint about the whole book---basically too much high school drama! Too much of the high school perspective. It was like a contemporary novel that decided it wanted to explain its students's misery with a paranormal element... but it didn't have the touching, emotional development of a contemporary and it lacked the magical or creepy edge that a paranormal would have.
9. (--) Unbelievable - I probably already wrote about how unbelievable parts of this story were... but it gets its own category because I think that one of the key aspects in writing a paranormal is making sure that it's believable... (or at least established well). And that didn't happen for me here.
10. (+) The Cover - I like this cover a lot because the red hair is a really good image for fury. It also features arguably the most important character: Ty. Plus, it's just pretty. It doesn't tell you all that much about the book, but in combination with the summary, I feel like the cover provides good symbolism.
Part of my criticism may stem from the fact that the BEA accounts I read all said that the excerpt Elizabeth Miles read from Fury made it sound awesome. I enjoyed it... but not as much as I had hoped I would.